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Re: Dangerous Ink (Chapter 2)
You added more description! Hurray!!! Still, make sure that what you are writing is clear! I am looking forward to reading more!
Nov 20, 2007 -
Re: City of Ashes
wow, I would freak out if I had a dream like that! It was really good, your description was great!
Nov 19, 2007 -
Re: Dangerous Ink Chapter 1
I suggest that you add more detail. Show, don’t tell. I know that it’s harder when you’re writing in first person, but let your character describe things with showing words ...
Nov 18, 2007 -
Re: Welcome New Members!
Thanks kitty! I really enjoy fantasy for writing and reading, But I’m open for everything else.
Nov 14, 2007 -
Re: Welcome New Members!
Hello! I too am new here, and wanted to say hi. Hi!!! =D
Nov 14, 2007